"As long as I can keep looking into these eyes every day for the rest of my life…” "
What a most beautiful story . . . a voyage of discovery in a very tender way. Shyly admitting their feelings for each other - their nervousness, the misunderstandings and their coming together - all brilliantly depicted.
I could almost hear them, the gruff voices speaking such passionate words and the final sentence was the perfect ending.
(And the two pictures described them so perfectly, too!)
I liked this, especially the little details, with them both standing in the rain (quite an erotic image, by the way) or the fact that you illustrated how shy they both are of commitment. Well done, really :)
:) I have a thing about rain. I have caught myself writing in rain scenes in more than a few of my fics. It just seems very erotic and peaceful, and I love to mix those two things together. Thank you so much! Big hugs! Sarah
Hi Sweetie! I just finished reading your lovely story, too! Thank you for your sweet words about my fic. I really enjoy writing these guys. :) My pet obsession is the website, and I've put a lot of work into it, but very few of the stories there are my own. I love putting background music and pix with the stories. :) Big hugs Sarah
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Date: 2006-08-16 05:11 pm (UTC)What a most beautiful story . . . a voyage of discovery in a very tender way. Shyly admitting their feelings for each other - their nervousness, the misunderstandings and their coming together - all brilliantly depicted.
I could almost hear them, the gruff voices speaking such passionate words and the final sentence was the perfect ending.
(And the two pictures described them so perfectly, too!)
Thank you to rifleman_s
Date: 2006-08-16 06:47 pm (UTC)Thank you again! Big hugs
Sarah
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Date: 2006-08-16 06:30 pm (UTC)Thank you to makamu
Date: 2006-08-16 06:49 pm (UTC)Sarah
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Date: 2006-08-16 07:06 pm (UTC)Thank you
Date: 2006-08-16 07:22 pm (UTC)I just finished reading your lovely story, too! Thank you for your sweet words about my fic. I really enjoy writing these guys. :)
My pet obsession is the website, and I've put a lot of work into it, but very few of the stories there are my own. I love putting background music and pix with the stories. :)
Big hugs
Sarah