drabble: The Learning of Patience (Viggo/Bean, adult)

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title: The Learning of Patience
by: stormatdusk
pairing: viggo/bean
rating: adult
disclaimer: this is purely fiction.
warnings: bdsm-ish. this bunny was not in a holiday mood. *g*
a/n: written for december's drabblechalleng for this picture.






You've been this way for hours now
Each precious minute shows in near-tremble of
stretched arms
tense belly
weeping cock.

You strain blindly, silently for more.
Feathered touches on singed nerve-endings
Gentle laving over private skin
Pornographic whispers in your ear
bring you close, so close, but
never
enough.

Finally:
You can beg me now.

Your breath rushes out to me.
Please, Sir; please let me come.
God, Viggo, I need it, need you, please -

You shiver on the knife's edge
Eden just beyond reach...

Not yet.

The gift of your anguished shriek will echo long in my memory.



-end-

Comments

[afra_schatz]

Eden just beyond reach Such a gorgeous way of phrasing that. *purrs*

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

ooo, purring. thank you. :)

[splix.livejournal.com]

Oh - beautiful.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

thanks very much.

[phytha.livejournal.com]

GUH! What a way with words,and what a sense for composition. Love every single line! AND it's HOT!!! Thank you so much for sharing

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

i'm really happy you liked it. :)

[rotpunkt.livejournal.com]

Well THAT is a Christmas poem :).

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

ho ho ho. ;)