Need advice
Jun. 20th, 2003 12:59 pmI'm in the process of completing a 3some fic and it's coming out quite longish (and rather twisted but it will sort out in the end, more or less). I'm still rather new at this, so I need honest advice from the reader base: the longest part is when they take turns shagging and the descriptions are mostly psychological. Should I take out my scissors and start cutting? Or would that be the part you wouldn't mind being long?
Also, if anyone is willing to beta it do let me know (it's Sean/Viggo/Marton and I hope to have it done after the weekend).
Tks
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Date: 2003-06-21 02:18 am (UTC)It's going to come out quite twisted and the poor Marton bunny is rather pissed at me
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Date: 2003-06-21 04:17 am (UTC)Hey, I *cough* resemble *cough* that remark... *G*
It's going to come out quite twisted
*rubs hands together gleefully* I'm loving it already!