Need advice

[moldava.livejournal.com]

I'm in the process of completing a 3some fic and it's coming out quite longish (and rather twisted but it will sort out in the end, more or less). I'm still rather new at this, so I need honest advice from the reader base: the longest part is when they take turns shagging and the descriptions are mostly psychological. Should I take out my scissors and start cutting? Or would that be the part you wouldn't mind being long? Also, if anyone is willing to beta it do let me know (it's Sean/Viggo/Marton and I hope to have it done after the weekend). Tks

Comments

[jennandanica.livejournal.com]

*waves* i'm willing to beta if you're interested. and no, don't cut. your beta should be able to tell you if it all works. plus the psychological aspects of something like a threesome are wonderful and should be included. at least imho.

[moldava.livejournal.com]

*waves back* and is very grateful. I'll be emailing it to you later today :)

[zillah975]

I agree with jennandanica - the psychological is good. IMO, it's the best part - the part that's really hot. But that's me. :)

[versinae.livejournal.com]

Psychological descriptions and musings during sex are hot. In my opinion. :)

[yueni]

I'm always a willing beta, and no, don't cut. :) you can email it to me at pevra@excite.com

[moldava.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'll email it to you later today. Just be advised it's sort of twisted and angsty ..

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Sorry, can't really offer any sage advice, but I'm SO looking forward to reading the results. *G*

[moldava.livejournal.com]

Greedy girl (and a naughty one too.. you had me smoking with that cigarette thingy) ;)
It's going to come out quite twisted and the poor Marton bunny is rather pissed at me

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Greedy girl (and a naughty one too
Hey, I *cough* resemble *cough* that remark... *G*

It's going to come out quite twisted
*rubs hands together gleefully* I'm loving it already!