DOUBLE DRABBLE: Burning Out (SB/VM) PG-13/R

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Title: Burning Out
Authors: delica and milochka
Rating: PG-13 / R
Warning: A squidgy cigarette-butt thingy that may squick some.
Summary: Sean's waiting. Wanting. Wishing. For what, though?
Feedback: We would love it.
Disclaimer: This is 100% fiction.
Notes: For two gals who hate cigarettes, we sure seem to enjoy smoking-themed fics! Our Sean and Viggo icons wanted to get together and play, and this is the result. Our first collaboration -- but definitely not our last. Written in relay format, one part each.



Inspired by these two icons:
waiting!Sean...     and smoking!Viggo


-- [*] --

Sean walks out of the shower, straight into the bedroom. Naked.

He knows Viggo is somewhere in the house, and almost calls out Viggo's name, but stops himself just in time.

Leaning against the headboard of the bed, hands behind his head, Sean's eyes focus on the nothingness in front.

Waiting. Wanting. Wishing.

When the very bit of fume tickles his nostrils, Sean glances towards the doorway, where Viggo is wearing half a smile with a burning cigarette between his slightly-parted lips.

Viggo's eyes narrow at the last drag, sucking so hard as if it's Sean's cock.

-- ~ --

Sean watches Viggo jack off. Ash falls from the cigarette every time Viggo's body twitches; he's close now.

"Are you my slut, Sean?" Viggo's cock slides up Sean's chest, smacks the underside of his chin, ghosts across his parted lips, and stops.

"Yes..."

"My willing whore?"

"Always. Please..."

"Good. Close your eyes. Got something for you."

His jaw is cupped, held open while Viggo spurts, and suddenly there's bitter. Acrid.

Sean sputters as the cigarette is stubbed out in the come pooled on his tongue.

Not quite what he'd been waiting -- wanting -- wishing -- for.

-- [END] --

Comments

[moldava.livejournal.com]

Oh god, I'll never be able to look at those icons without getting hot. Am making a note to myself to get around to making the most lurid icon I can work out in the hope that it will inspire such a thing as this *G*

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Heh... an icon-themed drabble challenge. Could be interesting. Yes!
So glad you had as much fun reading this as we had writing it! Thanks.
(And hey, feel free to send me your most lurid pics. Always looking for new kinks ideas to explore. *G*)

[moldava.livejournal.com]

Yess, I like the icon-themed challenge. And since I know I totally suck at making icons I'm claiming your Reforged icon (stops to pant) for a drabble or ficlet. Bunny (quite an obvious one) just visited while I was in line at the supermarket..

[delica.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie. *hugs* Glad you like it!
Am such an icon fetish that i always drool over other's icons *g* and this is not the first time i was inspired and wrote sth for icons ;)
heeee, cant wait to drool over see your new ones.

[smut-polar-bear.livejournal.com]

*squee*

I don't really like smoking, but this still made my crappy day a little bit better. (it's only 7:21am here, and I'm already having a terrible day. blah)

Sean serving as an ashtray was a surprise, mainly because I haven't seen it before. Interesting visual. :)

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Thanks -- we're so pleased you liked this! (And yeah, delica and I both hate smoking too... we were talking about it in email after she read my "Smoke" fic (http://www.livejournal.com/users/milochka/5016.html) (which was the first fic I'd ever written, ack!))

Re: ashtray!Sean, he said in an interview once that his "party trick" was stubbing a cigarette out on his tongue, and that if you hit the right area towards the back of the tongue then it shouldn't really hurt. That quote always stuck with me, for some reason... was just waiting for the right time to use it in a fic. *G* Thanks again for your FB!

[delica.livejournal.com]

Re: ashtray!Sean, he said in an interview once that his "party trick" was stubbing a cigarette out on his tongue
*squees*
where did you find that, babe *eg*

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Finally tracked it down: It's this interview (http://www.compleatseanbean.com/mainfeatures-30.html) -- it's the very last question on the page. Hilarious.

[delica.livejournal.com]

*giggling insanely*
Ooh man, i'm laughing my tears out on the floor. my stomach is complaining now.
Truly Hilarious!
the questions were very -very- stupid, but Sean is so adorable. LOL
i especially love the part he said about turning on hotel room porn channel accidentally *G*

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

OMG, LOLOLOL...what an *insane* interview!!! Sometimes I realize I don't really *want* to know what men talk about...eek...
The porn channel thing had me *dying* of laughter...ROFLMAO...
Seanie is crazy, absolutely crazy!!

Oh, and as for the fic...

"Are you my slut, Sean?" Viggo's cock slides up Sean's chest, smacks the underside of his chin, ghosts across his parted lips, and stops.

*dead dead dead* Fantastically sexy image.

I find smoking sexy sometimes in films...when I don't have to smell or taste it..heh. And this was so naughty...eek...

[delica.livejournal.com]

*squeals*
*licks your Caravaggio!Sean*
*fans self and shrinetolust*

Thanks! Glad you enjoy it!
Ooh, how I loooove that crazy interview *V* Sean is absofuckinglutely adorable *G*

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you so much for the fanning...and letting me know where the pic was from!! I just thought it was yummy and had quailquill make me an icon out of it!!
*licks other side of bare!Sean*

I just had my husband read that interview because I HAD to share it...and it was too funny because he said that he's put on the welding helmet and pretended to be Darth Vadar...lol...so it's not such an odd question!

I LOVE the interview because it's so Seanie coming off gruff and manly...yet not. He does own up to a lot of stuff that's maybe less-than-manly...heehee...like getting hit by a girl.

Hubby wondered if Sean's apparent aversion to anal sex would affect our slash writing...I said, nah, he could always be change his mind..heehee...

[delica.livejournal.com]

{{{hugs}}}
*licks your killer-grin!Sean icon* and since your Caravaggio!Sean is actually quite naked in that scene, so lick him all over again *G*

I enjoy that piece of interview -so- much also with Sean talking about afraid of being tortured by rats(!) and anal sex (guh). Ooh fun! I'm still carrying this biggest silly grin on my face ;D

And my highest respect to your hubby, hon, for you can share everything. :))

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

^^^^^^ Quite naked? As in *very* naked?? __thud__

Gotta figure out how to beg, borrow, or steal this video from somewhere...my Seanie knowledge is limited..must change that!!

His grin is beautiful, isn't it?? Demands that he be kissed immediately!!

And rats and anal sex...lol...poor Sean!! *has same silly grin on face as delica

My hubby is just the most wonderful catch for me...he accepts and often even shares in all my crazyness!! *kisses hubby* *kisses Sean again* Mmm..this could get interesting. *G*

[delica.livejournal.com]

alright, Sean was actually -very- naked in "Caravaggio", and even better in "Lady Chatterley", as Viggo in "Indian Runner" and "Psycho" *mewl* (you really should go and drool over cinzia's icons *g*)

*licks Sean*
*licks Viggo*

*puddle of goo*

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

oooh, Naked!Sean...Naked!Viggo...two of the finest things in life...*sigh*

*drools over cinzia's icons* verrry nice...

lannamichaels has a slew of deliciously naughty icons, and some of them are quite hilarious, too! :P

[delica.livejournal.com]

the lovely milochka has put up an icon-themed challenge (http://www.livejournal.com/community/rugbytackle/148705.html). wanna have fun?

go you~

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

I'd love to..but I have this problem where if I start too many things at the same time I never finish any of them. I dunno how everyone writes so much every day--I can't keep up!! :P

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[delica.livejournal.com]

ack, i can't even keep up with the readings and posting comments, not to mention writing.....

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

Ya know, I love that we have had an entire conversation that no longer has anything to do with the original post..lol..well, aside from Seanie and Viggo, of course!!

And yeah, I spent most of the weekend reading and commenting and answering emails...just gonna have to *stop* at some point and do my own writing! :P

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I've added you, hope you don't mind!!

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[delica.livejournal.com]

*friends you back*
Ooh, I love Orli, too. ViggOrliBean is my favorite trio *V* and I first entered this fandom reading tons of ViggOrli and A/L ;D
*hearts new friend*

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

*HUGS* Yeahy, fellow Orli-lover!! I am writing a Vig/Orli/Bean right now...was inspired by karelian's delightful threesomes!!

If you can still stand A/L slash, that was the first one I wrote and it's linked from one of my LJ entries...

[delica.livejournal.com]

I am writing a Vig/Orli/Bean right now
*squees*
how i loooove to hear this *smooches you*

afraid i'm no longer into LotR FPS any more. will go read your RPS~~
*cuddles*

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

heehee..so many people, once they move to RPS, can never go back...heh.

I unfortunately don't have any RPS for you to read yet...I'm new to the whole slash thing, so you'll have to wait for my Vig/Orli/Bean...I think it'll be worth the wait..I hope! :P

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[delica.livejournal.com]

i will wait! i will wait! i will wait! *puppy eyes*

write more, pleeeeeeease. ;))

[shrinetolust.livejournal.com]

Oh no, not *puppy eyes*!! The guilt!!

I am trying, I am trying! :P Have 8 pages already...and they haven't even started the sex yet..lol..there is lots of yumminess already, though.. :P

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[smut-polar-bear.livejournal.com]

I actually dated a guy who used to put his cigarettes out on his tongue. *blech* I hated kissing him. But yeah, that's an interesting quote. And you're welcome for the fb :)

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Yeah. For me, kissing a smoker is akin to licking an ashtray -- that's how it tends to taste, unfortunately. :-(

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[smut-polar-bear.livejournal.com]

Yes, they do taste like ashtrays. *blechs again*

*goes in search of strawberries*

[delica.livejournal.com]

*squees* Glad you enjoy it!

Ahem, I personally have -very- seriously issue with smoking. and keep those smoking!Viggo pic away for such a long time...until madly in love with milochka's wonderfully hot fic Smoke (http://www.livejournal.com/users/milochka/5016.html#cutid1) *V*

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[smut-polar-bear.livejournal.com]

A friend's father died of lung cancer, and my grandmother has emphysema from smoking. That and smokers taste like crap. :)

[delica.livejournal.com]

i hate smoking in RL, and always being a second-hand victim. and, yeah, i fully understand that. :)

[lunasv.livejournal.com]

Positively wicked.
A wee bit pervy.
And I love it!

[milochka.livejournal.com]

*G* Thanks so much -- we're thrilled that you enjoyed it!

[delica.livejournal.com]

{{{hugs}}}
Thank you! Glad you enjoy it!
Writing in collaboration was -so- much fun!!

[dead-kennedy.livejournal.com]

not just what Sean's been waiting for, me too! I am so happy you posted this, and I'm really happy with the way you did it as the double drabble. it gives the, um, climax <;) so much more punch. you always know how to brighten up my day. love, kate

[milochka.livejournal.com]

{hugs kate and hands out cookies}
Um. I owe you email. *embarrassed smile* Terribly sorry I haven't replied yet... Sean and Orli may spank flog do with me as they please. *G*

Y'know, after several false starts I finally accepted I was never going to be able to do that bit the total justice it deserved. So I condensed it all into one straightforward sentence. :-) And it happened to fit so perfectly with delica's part of the drabble that I figured it was time to use it.

Thanks so much for coming out of the woodwork to comment -- hope things are looking brighter for you. //sends you happy vibes

[dead-kennedy.livejournal.com]

cookies! hugs! wheeee!

things are looking up, thanks - cee was in nyc this weekend and we got together for a little bit. talked about safekeeping - I might have something new very soon. fingers crossed. love, kate