Written for November challenge at drabblechalleng

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Title: Enigma
Author: rifleman_s
Characters: Sean and Viggo
Archive: Rugbytackling
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Fiction, as always. No offence intended to anyone.

Written for November challenge at drabblechalleng

Based on this picture:




Enigma

I felt like Vivien in Pretty Woman.

“I appreciate this whole seduction scene you’ve got going here, Viggo, but I’m a sure thing”.

I mean, really? Viggo setting up a scene like this on his patio – elegant table settings, pristine oven, borders neatly trimmed, a hammock? And he’d even cleaned the floor! I’ve never known a clean floor in all the time I’ve been coming here.

“Why?”

“Why what?”

“Why all this cleanliness? Why all this romance?”

“Love surprising you. Keep you on your toes. Don’t want you to get bored”.

Bored? The man’s a total enigma.

Luckily for me.

~End~

Comments

[alex-quine.livejournal.com]

That is such a charming, tender, little scene with just the right level of loving exasperation on your Sean's part to keep it from becoming too sweet - and it made me giggle thinking about the lads, post some liquid refreshment, sharing or trying to get out of that hammock. great fun.

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Oh you've captured it exactly!

If I'd been able to write humour really well, I would defitely have written something about the hammock!!

Thanks for such a lovely comment. :)

[offski.livejournal.com]

I don't think you need to write the hammock scene. The mere suggestion of it is enough.

Funny and tender - loved it, thanks.

Mari

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Yes, sometimes it's enough just to use one's imagination . . .

So glad you enjoyed; thanks for the comment. :)