Double drabble, "Here Today" Part 2, Viggobean, PG

[fantasy-land.livejournal.com]

Title: "Here Today", Part 2: We were worlds apart
Pairing: Viggobean
Rating: PG
Author: fantasy_land
Summary: Maybe Sean doesn't know Viggo quite so well
Warnings: None that I can think of.
Feedback: Yes, please, definitely
Disclaimer: Pure fiction, made it all up. Lyrics are property of Paul McCartney and the characters are property of themselves.
Notes: Double drabble based on the song "Here Today" by Paul McCartney, the full lyrics to which can be found here. Continues where part 1 left off. Thanks for all the comments on the first one...they were very encouraging!




Sean recognized the song and turned it off, but not quickly enough, managing to catch the next line. "Well, knowing you, you'd probably laugh and say that we were worlds apart if you were here today." He sighed. That's exactly what Viggo would do if he heard him right now, chuckle and remind him of how different they were, how much time they spent away from each other. Viggo wouldn't be cruel enough to elaborate, but Sean remembered the details well enough on his own. He remembered that when Viggo wanted to discuss politics, he'd talk to Sir Ian, whose views were always controversial and well thought out. If he was in the mood to talk music, he went to Elijah with his eclectic, random tastes. If he wanted to have a conversation about art or poetry, the ever-enthusiastic Orlando was his partner of choice. For talks on life, religion, and other philosophical topics, Viggo went to Karl, thoughtful and intense. Sean himself was quieter, less ready for deep discussions, which was why Viggo hardly turned to him for them. Sean didn't really mind, but he thought that maybe, he didn't know Viggo quite as well as he first thought.

Comments

[jenmstar.livejournal.com]

I liked the descriptions of the other characters in this. Very interesting (plus Orlando wasn't a child and Karl wasn't a jerk, which totally made my day). This was very well written and most interesting. I very much hope there is a part three and a part four, and a part five, and a part six, etc, etc, etc

[fantasy-land.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's good to know the other characters came across as real people, not just as fillers in the story. I get rather annoyed at Child!Orlando myself, because the impression I get from him is excited and happy about most things, but certainly not whiny and bratty...and I never got the whole Bastard!Karl thing...yeah, the man looks intense, but in a good way, i think.

Part 3 is in the works...it got schizophrenic and wants to go in 2 different directions, so I shall have to make an executive decision about it soon.

[jenmstar.livejournal.com]

Yeah, every time I see a pic of Karl I just want to hug him.

Am most happy to hear that there is going to be a part three. Will be looking forward to it.

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Aww! Poor Sean! *cuddles Sean* I don't like it when Sean feels inferior so you need to get Viggo to see how much he needs him ... please?

Lovely stuff by the way.

[fantasy-land.livejournal.com]

Heh...I think Sean needed a bit of humility after being all smug at first, but don't worry, he'll be happier eventually. Not in the next part, I don't think, but at some point before the end of the story.

Thanks for reading!

[phantomas.livejournal.com]

I've read Part1 and now 2...taps fingers...taps fingers...yes, I am waiting for part 3..taps fingers...

Very intrigued, yes, and I like very much the short strokes that highlight the actors, quite realistic.

[fantasy-land.livejournal.com]

hehe...you don't have to wait much longer. part 3 is going to be posted tonight after a final edit.

i'm very glad you enjoyed the first 2 parts. hopefully the next will live up to the wait. heh.

thanks for commenting!