Drabble "Messages"

[archet.livejournal.com]

Written for this week's 'bitter' theme for the lotrips100 community.






“Sean, it’s been weeks. You know I can’t get away. Call. Me.”


click


Sean jabs the erase button, the machine continues.


“This is the tenth message I’ve left this week. I know you’re listening. Please... Fine.”


click


Sean presses erase.


“All right, tear us down, Sean. I know I deserve it. Just promise that you’ll rebuild us again and I’ll wait. However long it takes. I love you.”


click


Sean remembers Viggo’s loving hands on his skin, remembers Viggo’s hungry hands on another.


Sean’s index finger stabs down. “Fuck you, Vig.”


The machine erases and there are no more messages.

Comments

[alexabond.livejournal.com]

Oh, this was...bitter and sad. Maybe you'll continue it where Viggo can make it up to Sean somehow?
Great idea btw. I haven't seen it done before.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Maybe you'll continue it where Viggo can make it up to Sean somehow?

I hadn't planned on it, though drabbles seem to have a will of their own, so you never know. Thanks for your comments!

[valour.livejournal.com]

oh ow.

Harsh but very well done.

I can feel the bitter coming off in waves.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I think it turned out even more bitter than I intended. Bad Viggo. ;)