[identity profile] jenmstar.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] rugbytackle
Title: Order
Author: [livejournal.com profile] jenmstar
Pairing: SB/VM
Rating: PG
Posted to: [livejournal.com profile] rugbytackle [livejournal.com profile] sons_of_gondor [livejournal.com profile] fellow_shippers [livejournal.com profile] bean_squee
Disclaimer: Not real. Total fiction
Notes: Not beta-ed. Slightly different style than normal. Came from watching FOTR with the cast commentary on.
Feedback: Would love feedback as this is a little bit off of my normal kind of story.


It still surprised Sean how many people thought that movies were shot in order.

They weren't.

He wondered if things would have been different if films were short in order.

But they weren't.

In fact, his death had been shot, he laughed at the pun, rather early on in filming.

That had changed things. His death.

Rebirth, Viggo had called.

Viggo.

That's what had changed. Viggo had changed. They had changed. Together.

It would have been ok if only Aragorn had cried over Boromir's death. That was acting. That was their life.

But the camera's had stopped, they had gone to Sean's house, and Viggo had cried. Not Aragorn. Viggo.

He had cried in Sean's arms. Still sobbing even after he had run out of tears to cry. His body finally collapsed against Sean's as his strength, physical and emotional, gave out.

And Sean had cried much later that night. Cried for Viggo, for how beautiful a person he was in strength and in weakness, his openness to feel, to share those feelings. And he cried for himself, that he couldn't feel like that, share like that, that he wasn't strong enough to ask Viggo to stay while he cried.

But he had looked at Viggo the next morning and Viggo seemed to know. Sean had been wrapped in Viggo's arms within seconds.

But Sean hadn't cried. He had cried the previous night. There had been no more tears left.

So he did the only thing he could think of. He held onto Viggo and kissed him.

That had changed everything.

So he supposed things would have been different if his death, Boromir's death, had been filmed last.

lurkers anonymous

Date: 2003-11-18 04:32 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
sigh
lovely
just lovely
bunny lurks back under bed

Date: 2003-11-18 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toooldnotto.livejournal.com
It works beautifully, in idea, form and expression. A couple of typos (short for shot, feel for feeling), but it's lovely. And shivery, thinking about what might not have happened.

In all these months I have not had the guts to listen to the cast commentary. Guess I should.

Date: 2003-11-18 04:55 am (UTC)
seleneheart: (yellow hair)
From: [personal profile] seleneheart

I think the whole thing works, nice take on the cast commentary.

Date: 2003-11-18 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liars-dance.livejournal.com
Lovely Jen. Just lovely.

LOVE IT!!

Date: 2003-11-18 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weiwei007.livejournal.com
[So he supposed things would have been different if his death, Boromir's death, had been filmed last.]

That's what I always wish should be true.
Sigh~~~

Love your fic and love you!

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