Drabble: Need You (VM/SB), PG
Dec. 6th, 2003 08:48 pmAuthor Nimlet
Title Need You (drabble)
Pairing VM/SB
I really suck at summaries... First in a series of drabbles based on Nine Inch Nail’s Eraser (lyrics can be found here)
DiscalimerNone of this happened. I made it all up.
FeedbackYes, please. This is first fic in a long time (first under this name) and I'd like to see what people think.
ArchiveRugbytackling, anyone else can just ask
note: unbeta’d so any errors are my own... and first person pov, so if that pisses you off, be forewarned.
Need you
You walk across our trailer, dropping parts of your costume as you go. Cloak, sword, boots, pants... All fall to the floor where props and wardrobe girls will find them later. I keep my back turned, furtively watching you through the small square of mirror that I’ve kept uncovered. I witness golden skin being revealed, its perfection painted with dark bruises, souvenirs from weeks of shooting.
I watch you pull on a pair of jeans and hear your groan when you stand up. Then I leave the room, leave you to finish in privacy, and drive to my lonely house.
Title Need You (drabble)
Pairing VM/SB
I really suck at summaries... First in a series of drabbles based on Nine Inch Nail’s Eraser (lyrics can be found here)
DiscalimerNone of this happened. I made it all up.
FeedbackYes, please. This is first fic in a long time (first under this name) and I'd like to see what people think.
ArchiveRugbytackling, anyone else can just ask
note: unbeta’d so any errors are my own... and first person pov, so if that pisses you off, be forewarned.
Need you
You walk across our trailer, dropping parts of your costume as you go. Cloak, sword, boots, pants... All fall to the floor where props and wardrobe girls will find them later. I keep my back turned, furtively watching you through the small square of mirror that I’ve kept uncovered. I witness golden skin being revealed, its perfection painted with dark bruises, souvenirs from weeks of shooting.
I watch you pull on a pair of jeans and hear your groan when you stand up. Then I leave the room, leave you to finish in privacy, and drive to my lonely house.
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Date: 2003-12-07 02:06 am (UTC)I like needy viggo, and I'm so glad this the first of a run. I'd love to hear more!
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Date: 2003-12-07 06:22 pm (UTC)Ugh, I guess that means I need to keep writing... Only the first four are done :S
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Date: 2003-12-07 03:36 am (UTC)The voice is very Viggoesque - it reminds me a lot of his poetry.
And the best part is there's going to be more! :D
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Date: 2003-12-07 06:23 pm (UTC)THANK YOU. I was hoping that it wouldn't sound totally unviggo.
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Date: 2003-12-07 04:03 am (UTC)PS Have archived this at Rugbytackling, thanks!
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Date: 2003-12-07 06:24 pm (UTC)It's not going to get any happier, though :S
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Date: 2003-12-07 08:22 am (UTC)