The bat

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Title:The bat
Author: french_hobbit
Pairing: SB/VM
Rating: PG
Archive: Rugbytackling
Note: late response to milochka's anagrams challenge. The words I picked were GREY, BAT and LUCK. Thanks to hot_x_bunny for beta.



... lost my fly. It entered this room. Human place. I will rest on this nice curtain-rod. Echolocating. A board humans use for sleeping. Someone is on it. Male. Why do they prefer to lie down rather than hang upside down? Humans are surprising creatures. Wait, another one is there. They are so close I couldn't discern him. It's warm here. I will stay a while... Alert! The bulkier one is coming toward me. Waving something... a broom! How irritating. Flying.

- Sean, there's no luck this tiny grey bat was watching us!
- You never know, love.

Comments

YAY

[greedy_dancer]

*claps and cheers*
this is great! very well done, sis' !!
really, did you ever consider writing something more ... lenghty?
(and i guess it answers my last comment. i'm stupid. lol)

Re: YAY

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you for encouraging me before and cheering me after, it means a lot. As for your question, well, we'll see :o)

[a-chromatic.livejournal.com]

Um, try this under correct screen name, and maybe with the right tags, too.

*sporfle!* Poor bat! Just trying to check out the VigBean action take a quick break and he gets chased out!

Cute lil' drabble :)

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you! And thanks to the pervy tired little bat for telling me its story...

[milochka.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this drabble -- very original! (And how I'd love to be a "fly on the wall" around those two boys... *g*)

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked this. *envies bats, flies and other mice around them*

[rinsbane.livejournal.com]

*snicker* Milochka's right -- that's very original. I quite like it.

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[amentiii.livejournal.com]

This may be the only time in your writing career that you'll get kudos for bat dialogue, but still.

So clever! Go you!

[french-hobbit.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. It was quite fun thinking like a bat.

[milochka.livejournal.com]

PS: Have archived this at Rugbytackling -- thank you!