[identity profile] lilypossibly.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] rugbytackle
Without an 'r'? What's wrong with the letter 'r' I ask you ?
And, did you guys make 'lipogram' up?

*grins*

Title ‘Invitation’
Pairing : Sean B/Viggo
Rating : PG13
Author’s Note 1 : For rugbytackle without an 'r' drabble challenge, so, uhm, ugbytackle dabble challenge ?
Authors Note 2 : Note to self, when writing fic to exclude the letter r water is not a good subject choice! I mean, duh!?
Disclaimer : This is made up entirely, no offence is meant.
Feedback : would be adored.



‘Invitation’

It could easily be a chick moment that sends him packing.

It’s been known.

Glowing candles, blue to match the soft sheen on the walls, cast smoky shadows and sketch a halo above the man who lies back, eyes closed. Who is hazy beneath floating yellow petals.

But Sean enjoys the shape of defined muscle beneath smooth skin. Bath oil emphasises sleek, damp lines in liquid golden light.

An invitation to heaven.

Viggo looks up at him. Lust and longing glint in candle lit eyes.

This moment is passion. It is love.

Leaving is the last thing on Sean’s mind.

Date: 2004-06-11 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nessa-t.livejournal.com
*weeps*

This is so beautiful. Thank you so much fo- putting this up. :D

Date: 2004-06-11 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] french-hobbit.livejournal.com
No need to write down 'water' since you described it so beautifully with other words. Nice lipogram!

Date: 2004-06-11 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darknightjess.livejournal.com
Excellent job!!
Yay!
Ahhhh romance...
wheee!!

Date: 2004-06-11 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amentiii.livejournal.com
It could easily be a chick moment that sends him packing.

It’s been known.


Heh.

You know this was really very hot. And in spite of the candles and the bath oil and the flower petals, sort of NOT a chick moment. (fans self)

Nice work!

Date: 2004-06-11 10:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rinsbane.livejournal.com
*looks around confused* Bu-bu-but--it's happy! (and very pretty too! yay for pretty fic!) Is this two in a row now?! *prods* Heehee.

Date: 2004-06-11 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milochka.livejournal.com
Hey, great response to the challenge! Thank you! :-)

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