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Name: maltkate22
Story Title: (previously Truth) Alleyway Murder
Pairing: Sean/Viggo [main], others very minimal
Part: 2/?
Rating: PG –13 [for now]
Warnings: Alternate Universe. Deathfic.
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] sairlinde
Chapter Summary: They found another body again, simmilar victim, but then, it's much worse than murder. On the other hand, Dom is at Billy's house, while Orli and Elijah are teasing Sean.
x-posted: my livejournal and [livejournal.com profile] secretscrolls
disclaimer: no, i don't know them.
notes: after 3 months [meaning 12 agonizing weeks with writer's block], I have come up with the continuation of my fic. Hopefully I have improved from the previous [cause I'm not really satisfied with my first chapter]. :) BTW, my first language is NOT English. pardon me. :)



Though Investigator Karl wants to capture the culprit, he cannot since there was another found body in an alley on Brunes St. It was a similar victim, a teacher, but this time, the body was mutilated and the internal organs were removed. By the time Karl reached the scene, the body had already been identified.

“By the name of God!” exclaimed one of the officers who had seen the body, “Who could do such things?”

“It’s a minion of the devil,” replied another officer who covered his nose. The body was already starting to smell .

“A minion? Nay, it’s the devil himself!”

“It’s believed that the murder occured 12 hours ago, sir,” an officer told Karl as he handed him a paper containing what information they had been able to gather about the victim. He then bowed, in condolence, and proceeded to examine the body.

Hugo arrives at the place; donning his gloves and nodding at each officer he passes by. He then stops at Karl’s side, “It seems to me that this murderer is after someone.”

“He wants revenge, Hugo. He thirsts for blood. He thirsts for corrupt teachers who takes money from their students,” Karl looks around, and then whispers, “They are connected to the Higher Officials, Hugo. No wonder why they are being killed.”

Hugo raised his hands to silence Karl, “Have you no respect, Inspector Karl?”

“I’m not here to…”

“Have you not thought about that I could mark you as a primary suspect, Karl? That anger fuming inside you can be one reason why you could do these things,” he paused, looking at Karl intently, “I know about your brother, Karl and we’re on a case. Don’t let your rage consume you.” Hugo then went to the body, taking his time to find just a single evidence of the suspect.

Karl was then left with that thought.

Because they were busy with the victim no one noticed the Man in Black who vanished around the corner, and into the darkness…

***

“For Godsakes, Lij? Isn’t it obvious?” Orlando exclaimed as he sat on the chair. “They are to-ge-ther.”

Lij just shook his head, “Orli, dear, Dom is just sleeping over at Bill’s house. They aren’t to-ge-ther as you presume them to be.” He sat on their usual chair as Guffy served them their glass of milk.

“I still reckon that they’re together…I mean, Dom and Bill?” Orli nodded at Guffy as a sign of thanks.

Lij sighed, “They have been best of friends ever since Billy immigrated here, Orli. You know that.”

“But still…”

“Stop it, ok!” Elijah swigs his drink.

“Why don’t you and I go out instead?”

Elijah spurted out his milk as he stared wide-eyed at Orli.

“Just kidding.” Orli smiled as he patted Elijah’s back.

“That wasn’t funny.”

“Boys!” exclaimed Sean as he sat on the chair.

Orli clasped his hand on Sean as Elijah raised his half-emptied glass of milk. “So, how’s our Spanish Teacher? Interesting, innit?” Orli asked as he also took a swig from his glass.

“He’s fine, I guess.”

By the time Sean was already explaining why, Elijah and Orli started snickering. Though it amuses them to know that the two are having a good time, it is still possible that they might go beyond that. And with the sparkle of Sean’s eyes, it is definitely true.

“What’s funny?” Sean finally asked, looking at the snickering boys.

Orli cleared his throat while Elijah continued on laughing, “Ah, what thou love has conjured into thou green eyes, Mr. Bean!”

Sean started to glow red, but still insisted, “You, are both impossible.”

“But you and Sir Viggo are not impossible,” Elijah added as they both continued on laughing.

“Where are the other two?” Sean finally asked.

“Don’t change the subject.”

“Dom’s at Bill’s house,” Orli then stated.

“Aren’t they spending too much time with each other?”

Orli leaned over his seat and moved his hat to hide his eyes, “That’s what I’ve been telling to this airhead and he just can get the bloody clue.”

Elijah rolled his eyes, “Well, excuse me if I am an airhead, but as I have said many times, they are just BEST OF FRIENDS.”

Orli shook his head as he motioned Guffy another glass, “Best of friends or not, I am convinced they’re up to something.”

“And I still don’t care,” Lij retorted, his eyes averted from Orli to Sean, “Hey, what really happened to you and Sir Viggo?”

Orli immediately sat on his chair as he pulled his hat from his head, very eager to listen, “I’ve heard you’re getting along pretty well…” he raised his eyebrows up and down, making a big emphasis on his last words.

“Ah, you boys are creating a rumour.”

“It's not like that,” Orli looked at Sean intently, putting his hands on the table, “It’s just that, well…we thought that you were sweet, you know on Sir Viggo.”

“WHAT?”

“You know what,” Elijah stood up as he grabbed Orli’s arms, “we better get going, Orli. We should finish our homework before our classes start.”

“But it’s afternoon already!”

“I don’t care! Come on, let’s go!”

“Well,” Orli patted Sean’s shoulders as he got his hat from the table, “tell me more ‘bout Sir Viggo later.”

Elijah dragged Orli out of the store like a doll while Orli waved goodbye to Sean. Sean waved back and chuckled heartily. Though he admitted he was a little bit embarrassed about their confrontation about Viggo, it was nice that they have created a rumor, which can possibly be true.

“Aye, sir. I thought Mr. Orlando ordered another milk?” Guffy asked Sean.

Sean looked at the old man and replied, “Him and Elijah are having, should I say, issues with their relationship.” He pats the old man’s back as he called one waiter to clean up. He can’t wait for the dinner tomorrow.

Confused, Guffy just drank the milk.


***

“By all means, Hugo! You are the head of this case! You should find the suspect as soon as possible! If not, our school will die if this…*killer* continues on wandering the alleyways!” exclaimed Principal Graw, his voice is as almost as loud as the cry of a bear.

“I do want to advise you to stop being *pets* for the Government, Principal,” Karl shot back, his eyes never leaving the pacing form.

“We are not *pets* as you assume us to be, Sir Karl. We simply want to have these children some protection and decency over…”

Karl banged his hands on the table, his eyes wide and fuming, “Decency? DECENCY? Do you call getting money from the students’ decency? Whenever they fail, you ask them for money in exchange for good grades, am I right? You all imprudent, selfish-bast—“

“SILENCE! Both of you!” Hugo exclaimed as he stood up from his chair. The things happening on the case are already confusing him; he cannot have havoc ruining it. “We are not here to argue over personal things.”

Hugo breathed heavy amounts of air as he continued; “We are dead in our tracks, Principal. We haven’t any clues though we are really trying hard to determine the murderer.”

“Please Sir Hugo, you may not be God, but show us some compassion. Find the killer as soon as possible,” Graw bowed his head.

“We are trying our best, Principal. We’ll inform you immediately as soon as we have found the murderer.”

Graw bowed his head again. He then opened the door and went out from the room.

“Sir Hugo…”

“We’ll need more witnesses. I need more information about the killer.” Hugo immediately sat down on his chair and started to think.

“But sir,” Karl reasoned out.

“Karl,” he sighed, “I know you’re apprehensions about the Principal, but we are in this case already. I am not even sure that what we’re dealing with is human…”

-end of chapter 2-

Re: Part I please?

Date: 2004-06-13 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yudetpe.livejournal.com
Nice story, but where can I find Part I?
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Date: 2004-06-14 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sairalinde.livejournal.com
You already know I like this. I hope someone hasn't given you nasty feedback or something coz I know how terrible some folks can be. I do hope you manage to finish it. Wanna know who the bad guy is!

I have two in the works that I can't seem to get done so I can definately sympathize. Anyway as always keep sending me chapters and I'll try my best to help.

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