A Note in the Margin - Chapter 5

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

Finally got chapter five done ... I am far too slow at this!!

FIC: A Note in the Margin 5/11
AUTHOR: Widdershin
RATING: PG
PAIRING: SB/VM
FEEDBACK: Please!!! Cos it keeps me going!
WARNINGS: AU
ARCHIVE: Rugbytackling, Green Opals, OEAM
DISCLAIMER: This story is 100% fiction. The author doesn't know these people. These events never happened. Unfortunately.
BETA: Owlgrey who provided both the name and endless support!
SUMMARY: Viggo spends the night at Sean’s.

Chapter 5

Comments

[dalehead.livejournal.com]

Oh babe!

M!Viggo: I wanna bath too!
me: Will you pipe down, this isn't about you.
M!Viggo: Can I go over to Widdershins to play.
me: *sternly* No you bloody well can't, now back to your box and don't let me here another word from you.
M!Orli: See, I don't know why we put up with that.
me: Oh god, don't you start!

What we're all trying to say, dearheart, is that we love this story soooooo much but I wish you wouldn't put ideas into my boy's head! The big clean up is nearly here but he has to learn patience!

You're updating a lot quicker than me but more please!!!

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

LOL! Me and my Vig seem to be real trouble makers!! Looking forward to your big cleanup :)

I had a few chapters up my sleeve, but I am now back to writing furiously!!

[dalehead.livejournal.com]

Fab!

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

*G* Don't be ashamed, I had a few chapters prewritten while I puzzled over chapter 3!
Thank you so much for such lovely feedback. Sean is slowly getting there and poor Vig has a bit to go through yet ... he is going to need your cuddles :(

[ozcmom.livejournal.com]

Loved this again, as I knew I would. Nice to start seeing from Viggo's POV and heart wept when he thought Sean's stop at the chemist for 'supplies' was something else. Will be interested to see that backstory appear...

And the slow introduction, through Sean's 'education', to a little of what 'life on the other side of the glass' is like.. it's just wonderful and thoughtful and sensitively done.

Love you and love your story, hon!

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

aaawwww thank you!!! {hugs you}

Writing Viggo's POV was surprisingly difficult ... the words came easy enough, but I found it sad to write! (silly me)
Debating how much back story to reveal because my Viggo muse keeps stopping me from saying too much ... maybe just bits and pieces?? Will have to see how it pans out. *shrugs*

[ozcmom.livejournal.com]

Listen to your muses, m'dear. They have certainly been doing well by you thus far. huggles

[halsangel-1.livejournal.com]

I am really enjoying this story. It feels real. Looking forward to the next chapter

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

Thank you!
I am pleased you find it 'real'- that is the 'feel' I am aiming for and it is good to know it is working :)