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[nimmy.livejournal.com]

My first attempt at poetry in a long time *gg* I'd really appreciate FB, I'm still undecided if this is worth persuing. Then again it could be complete crap!



Disclosed reflections, a waltz of indication.
Epochs within hours,
Proximity maintained amidst the eddy.
Sublime desolation, cardinal,
Achieved.
The almost ancient form of love.
The strength of body, strength of man.
Lust as sweat, drips from hardened muscle,
Flesh engorged, corpulent and ruddy, slides.
Sighs, far from rendered, fall from lips burned.
Life’s drum beats to the fierce dispatch,
Flash sting, flees from passions’ jubilation.
Nirvana in a breath,
Bitterness dispelled in exultation.
Too, souls finally corrupted,
By piercing shrouded cores,
Eternal, cherished.

Jo
October ‘04

Comments

[widdershin.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, this is worth persuing!
Hot and beautiful ...

[nimmy.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, it's really hard to take a new direction and it helps to know someone likes it ;-)