[identity profile] thevixenne.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] rugbytackle

Yes, it's emotional, but sometimes the shoe fits.  Besides, I wanted to kind of write this from Sean's POV. 

 

The Picture Never Lies by Ashlyn K. Toliver

 

Sean’s sightless eyes forever stared beyond Viggo’s presence.  The picture was painted a few days ago, just before they both walked away from what could have been either the heaven of belonging or the hell of others condemning their love.  But the picture never lies, and Sean’s frozen gaze, in that intimate moment of shared candor between him and Viggo, speaks volumes.  Those eyes cannot see Viggo sitting dejectedly along an opposite wall, head down, small tears falling like drops in a chaos theory.  Those eyes spoke of hope, love, and redemption.

Date: 2005-08-22 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharra115.livejournal.com
wow, just wow

Date: 2005-08-22 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharra115.livejournal.com
I have to say, even when a break-up is mutual, and both have accepted the change, it can still upset them and cause tears. I don't blame Sean for his tears, I am sure there were reasons. Maybe you could expand the story sometime. :) I still like it.

Hello

Date: 2005-08-23 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faramirgirl.livejournal.com
How sad. Was there more to is?

Date: 2005-08-23 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nevanoon.livejournal.com
This is not "just a little drabble", this is definitely a work of art.

I must not tell you that motifs like "eyes", "picture", "gaze", and "tears" at last, appeal to me since I'm mostly a "visual" being.
Eyes are means of perception and realization, but they also may refuse to realize. But they always "mirror" the soul.

(Does that make sense? It's difficult for me to explain it in English, I should write it down in German and ask Anne to translate it, if you are interested)

Date: 2005-08-23 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rotpunkt.livejournal.com
Hi sis, nevanoon already told me how impressed she was by your work. I´m proud of you! And impressed of you each time! Which reminds me that I still have a wish free and that you´ll probably impress me a lot, then...

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