DRABBLE: Lines

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

TITLE: Lines
AUTHOR: rsharpe
PAIRING: V/S
RATING: R (Implied BDSM)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own the characters depicted in this story nor do I derive any profit from writing.
ARCHIVE: My Live Journal and in any other Community the story is posted.
A/N: A knout is a whip made of braided leather tails. The word "knout" is of Scandinavian origin.
SPECIAL THANKS: For "D", again and always.


"Do it."

Sean tried to swallow, tried to defy, tried not to tremble.

"Now."

There was steel beneath the rough silk of Viggo's voice and Sean reluctantly unbuttoned his shirt and let the protective cotton slide down his arms to the floor.

"Kneel."

Viggo nodded at Sean's obedience as he circled behind him. The ridges that crossed Sean's back, left to right, had faded from deep scarlet to dusty rose.

Sean inhaled sharply at the contact, but Viggo only arranged the leather tails of the knout diagonally across the existing marks.

Symmetrical. Contrasting. Pleasing.

Lines of pain.

And of pleasure.

- end -

Comments

[rotpunkt.livejournal.com]

Yay for a bit of BDSM that has real tension between the two in it! Is there more where that came from? :) I'd love to read more from you!

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Thank you! A friend advised me to post here as this was *the* place for Sean and Viggo. And yes, there are more already written but they need to be tweaked a bit more. Soon, I promise!

[lab-jazz.livejournal.com]

I love this...the contrast between the steel and the silk, the pleasure and the pain. I would like to read more of your BDSM stuff, if you have any.

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I worked really hard to show the contrast, so happy that you *got* it. There will be more after a bit of tweaking. This first one is turning into a series.

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Very powerful and effective piece ! I would love to read more of your work !

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Thank you for commenting. I'll be posting more as they are re-worked. I didn't feel I needed to change anything on this one so I went ahead with it.

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Always good to see new names on RT! Apologies if I've missed a ton of your stuff already ;) And I know its not my responsibility any more to mod this comm, but I would be grateful if you could put this behind an lj-cut as per the comm rules. Not all our readers like BDSM - implied or otherwise - thanks!

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Oops! Bad on me! I apologize and will not do it again! Got a bit distracted as I was making sure I posted the final version and I slipped up. And I certainly understand about certain likes and dislikes. We all have them.

[fawsley.livejournal.com]

Verrrry nice. Good, intelligent BDSM. More please!

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Thank you muchly. More to come as soon as I have someone check over the next couple. And I learn to read the rules right before I post so I don't mess up!

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"There was steel beneath the rough silk of Viggo's voice ..."

and obviously a bit of history here?

Love the short sentences at the end - that's very effective.

[foxrafer.livejournal.com]

I really like this. There's something in how you've depicted Viggo's artistic streak coming out in his dominance that is both really nice and slightly eerie, but in a good way. Thanks for posting.

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Absolutely perfect as is. Short and sweet and powerful and though hinting at the pain, the pleasure is definitely palpable. Loved this (and everyone pretty much knows I'm a stickler for details). Please give us more.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

already commented on your LJ, but just saying 'yum' again!

*waves*