Only You - a drabble plus a few extra words

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Author: Ashlyn K. Toliver

Rating: PG-13

Type: RPS

Pairing: Sean Bean/Viggo Mortensen     

Warnings: The merest hint of BDSM

Summary: ldle musings after play.

 

Viggo considers Sean's arched, supple back - a London Bridge of sturdy, resilient flesh and sinew that has seen its share of joy and pain, pleasure and sorrow.  It has stood tall and proud, bent but never broken. 

 

Bridges span, bridges transcend.

 

He traces with a calloused fingertip a long, snake-like raised trail of throbbing blood, one of many that adorn Sean like exotic markings that signify entrance into masculine mysteries.  His lover lightly trembles beneath the tender touch as he traces the origin slowly beginning to fade back into the skin like an ephemeral kiss, a Braille that can only be read through a fiery haze of nearly unbearable ecstasy.  Viggo reads each moan, each curse, each bit of defiance from the stubborn Brit who is man enough to allow this freedom.

 

Lips now follow where finger once led.  Sean leans into the seeking heat.  Growls...

 

"Only you..."

 

Viggo is once again humbled by the praise and the trust, reminded of just who truly holds the power by these two simple words.

Comments

[rsharpe.livejournal.com]

Excellent! I love that Sean's defiant yet still trusting Viggo. Only Viggo.

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Amazing how this came to me while in the middle of a project at work. I wrote it in twenty minutes. I've always been about showing even power exchange.

[rotpunkt.livejournal.com]

Intense and beautiful. I love the power shift you manage to show even in such a short "drabble + a few extra words" - the power dynamic and power balance that is so essential to me. It also makes me happy that Sean surrenders exclusively to Viggo :) "Only you", sis!

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

LOL...of course, you know what inspired me to write this...

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, a nice, quiet moment after... I like this imagery of Vig kissing Sean's brave back, all slow and worshippy. :)

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

I liked this imagery too. There is both love and trust in the simple gestures. I like to show that.

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"...a London Bridge of sturdy, resilient flesh ..."

What an intriguing image . . .

Simple words, but such strength behind them.

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I wrote this in the middle of a project at work and the words just flowed. The bridge idea just seemed natural somehow.

[foxrafer.livejournal.com]

This is a wonderful piece. I especially love the equality present in the relationship, something I really need to see when I read any kind of dom/sub fic. Thanks for sharing it.

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. Like you, when I read any Dom/sub fic, there has to be that sense of equality and trust, doesn't matter if it's a male Dom/male sub or a FemmeDomme story. Practically everyone here in the VigBean universe knows I'm a stickler for the details.

[stormatdusk.livejournal.com]

loved the atmosphere you created in so few words.

[thevixenne.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Amazing how a boring project at work just gave rise to this little drabble. Hmm, never know where inspiration will strike.