A Challenge Drabble

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Title: Five Senses
Author: rifleman_s
Characters: Viggo recognises Sean
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Just fiction, as always. Figment of my imagination and no offence intended to anyone.

A Drabble written for: bean_uncensored weekly Challenge no. 4


Based on this picture:




Five Senses

Recognition comes through the senses. To glide through the quintet is truly to know you. Your heady scent guides me home, that subtle blend of pheronomic musk belonging only to you, thrilling and unmistakable. Seeing your golden beauty, crowned with jade, never dulls my eyes. Hearing you, your voice, in every mood, passionate, obsessive, roused, loving, concerned or even indifferent, leaves a golden nugget of sound within my ear. The taste of you is for me alone. None other shall map out the flavour of your body, taste your essence, drink in your aroma. All these belong to me. And touch it is that finally merges our souls. Touching you, being touched by you, never cautious, always exhilarating. Finding that scar, that place, that nerve that flutters under the surface just there and stroking the etching on your skin that makes your blood stir for one thing other than me . . . 100% Blade.

~End~

Comments

[rotpunkt.livejournal.com]

100% beautiful!

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

I'm thrilled you think so! What a wonderful compliment!

(Also applies to S Bean and V Mortensen!)

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

*very satisfied smile*

Thank you.

[afra_schatz]

Wonderfully intense. Love the possesiveness in it and I think I fell in love with the italics in the second to last sentence - beautiful indeed.

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"...I think I fell in love with the italics in the second to last sentence..."

I'm really encouraged by that - and so glad it worked.

Thank you for your lovely comments.

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Great drabble ! Every single word counts and works towards the climax. Incredibly sensual and erotic, intense and possessive ! I liked it - can you tell ???:D

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

Oooh, what glorious feedback! *blushes heavily*

I'm really encouraged when I read comments like this; and very thrilled it worked for you.

Thank you so much.

[govi20.livejournal.com]

Such a beautiful drabble !! I love what you did with the challenge !

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

*takes a bow*

Thank you!!

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is lovely! And I do like that little wink from Viggo at the end - 100% Blade, indeed. ;)

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed.

Knowing how they both feel about Football, couldn't resist!!