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rugbytackleI think I really need someone to check up my slash stories in English 'cause people 've asked after them... Would you do it? Be my quest...
Ok, I send you one of my stories UNCHECKED! I know it's full of mistakes, damn it... *embarrassed already*
Title: It’ll do
Author: Suometar
Pairing: Viggo/Bean
Rating: G
Feedback: Thank you
Disclaimer: Fiction, nothing more than making of my own imagination, sorry.
Summary: Sean doesn’t like gays, but he likes Viggo.
Beta: I need one! Please, anyone?
Note: This one always reminds me of Project runway: What happened to Andrae?
One wouldn’t guess ‘cause of the tough shield of a villain, that Sean Bean is really a quiet and shy person. The openness of the hobbits, Elijah Wood, Billy Boyd, Dominic Monaghan and Sean Austin and the elf, Orlando Bloom, made him feel really uncomfortable. They all came hugging and kissing and teasing him every day, it was normal behaviour for them. But it made Sean feel really, I mean really, uncomfortable, but he just couldn’t make himself tell them to stop, he only hoped he could adapt to it just like Viggo did. And that Viggo Mortensen we’re talking about here, was the only person Sean could come and talk to and they both behaved. But there was this Orlando who lusted after Viggo’s attention, the way like a growing boy wants his dad’s attention. So there wasn’t really much Viggo to share with others when Orlando took it all. Until it stopped, all of a sudden, Orlando just stopped circling Viggo and played with his own friends, Sean didn’t understand it.
It was a break between the takes and Sean was looking around for Viggo, it was a bit harder this way. Orlando was always cheering over something or jumping around Viggo, so they were easy to find, but now Orlando was making himself noticed elsewhere. It felt almost like Viggo hid every time he wasn’t needed at the set.
- Ah, there you are.
Viggo heard the glad voice of Sean coming behind him, he turned to see the tall Brit looking down at him.
Viggo sat on the grass looking into direction where you couldn’t see any sight of filming of an epic movie, just beautiful landscape of New Zealand.
- May I sit? Sean asked and Viggo gave him some kind of sign for agreement, something like a nod and a mumble.
For a moment they were quit.
- What happened to Orlando? He’s usually with you all the time.
Viggo didn’t answer first, but when he saw how innocently Sean looked at him, he finally spoke.
- We broke up.
Sean's head exploded for a moment. Broke up? They were together? Viggo is gay?
- Wha? Escaped from Sean’s lips.
- We broke up, Viggo replied.
- You were together?
It was Viggo’s turn to be surprised.
- You didn’t know?
- Erm... no.
- Oh... well we were.
- Sorry, I just didn’t know that you... or Orlando, well maybe Orlando was expected, but that you...
- Yer mumbling Sean, Viggo noted.
Sean shut up, but Viggo gestured him to end the sentence.
- That yer a faggot, Sean finally said, embarrassed that he did.
After that, Viggo didn’t say a thing for a while, just took a sip from his water bottle. Then it hit him, was that a problem?
- Does it uncomfort you? Viggo asked and the question was little something Sean didn’t really expect.
- Uncomfort me?
- Yeah, like does it make you feel... I dunno... bad around me?
Sean was stunned, bad around Viggo? Never!
- No, thas stuupid mate, Sean barked with a smile so that he wouldn’t be taken so dead seriously.
- Well, you’ve made your opinion about faggots very clear, Viggo said, little scared.
- Yeah.
Sean had had that conversation with Vig before, it finally hit Sean why it had quietened Viggo back then. He had said something that taking gays behind the barn and shoot them isn’t the right thing, but he’d rather have those gays behind the barn if he was in front of it.
- Yeah, Viggo said with a lame smile.
- But I like ya Vig, no mat’ what ya are, Sean said.
Viggo didn’t bother to say anything lame, so he just looked at Sean.
- I’ve always knew ya *could* go that way, I mean, ya let Orlando kiss ya as a reward after ya finally got yer fight scene at the Weathertop right.
- Well, that hadn’t actually any romantic meaning in it, we got together weeks after.
- Thas what I mean, yer comfortable with someone acting like that.
Viggo didn’t have the time to say anything when Sean already continued.
- I’m not.
- Wha? Viggo asked automatically.
- I’m not comfortable with behaviour like that.
- Orlando kissing me?
Sean just nodded before he understood he did so.
- No! I... I mean, with... with the whole kissing thing, fuck...
- Anyone kissing me?
- No Vig! Fuck ya know wha I mean! It’s ‘bout the mankiss thing... or kissing at all, fuck! The Yorshire accent came strong through when Sean rumbled with his words.
Viggo sat there quietly and looked at Sean, sun was shining behind him, so Viggo had to wrinkle his eyes and that made Viggo’s face unreadable for Sean.
- Bah, Sean said with blushing face and stood up.
For a moment he just inhaled peacefully and sucked the beauty of the landscape.
Viggo stood up too and faced Sean. Despite his own blushing and speeding heartbeat Sean could tell Viggo was nervous, what for? Sean wondered.
- You can if ya want to, Viggo said and blushed.
- Wha?
Viggo blushed more and turned his face away from Sean, but didn’t back out.
- You heard me, he said and forced himself to face Sean again.
- Yeah, but wadda ya mean? I can not like the behaviour or what?
Viggo stunned, Sean was so slow.
- Ya can kiss me if ya want to, you daft! Viggo repeated, but couldn’t blush any more.
Sean’s eyes grew awfully big and mouth dropped open, but he quickly normalised.
- Oh, Sean just said and looked pass Viggo.
Viggo saw Sean’s head making some weird repeating movement, lifting and withdrawing. Then Sean just looked at him and slightly kissed him, just barely, it was more like some mistake when you pass someone awfully close.
They were both quiet and looked to the ground. For a while.
- Ya ment like that? Sean finally asked and lifted his head, Viggo’s eyes soon looked right into his.
- No.
Sean sighted, it didn’t sound disappointment, more like a “it figures” -kind of a sight.
- But it’ll do, Viggo said and smiled.
Sean smiled too, for a relief.
- ‘till when? Sean asked when Viggo was about to leave.
- Dunno, Viggo simply said and continued after out hailing.
- I see it’s up to you.
Viggo was already trying to leave again, when Sean raised his voice again.
- I want to.
- What?
- Kiss ya again, Sean whispered.
Viggo gave him a tired smile.
- But not now.
- Everybody sees?
- Yeah.
- Ok, Viggo said, patted Sean’s back and smiled happily.
c'mon...
Ok, I send you one of my stories UNCHECKED! I know it's full of mistakes, damn it... *embarrassed already*
Title: It’ll do
Author: Suometar
Pairing: Viggo/Bean
Rating: G
Feedback: Thank you
Disclaimer: Fiction, nothing more than making of my own imagination, sorry.
Summary: Sean doesn’t like gays, but he likes Viggo.
Beta: I need one! Please, anyone?
Note: This one always reminds me of Project runway: What happened to Andrae?
One wouldn’t guess ‘cause of the tough shield of a villain, that Sean Bean is really a quiet and shy person. The openness of the hobbits, Elijah Wood, Billy Boyd, Dominic Monaghan and Sean Austin and the elf, Orlando Bloom, made him feel really uncomfortable. They all came hugging and kissing and teasing him every day, it was normal behaviour for them. But it made Sean feel really, I mean really, uncomfortable, but he just couldn’t make himself tell them to stop, he only hoped he could adapt to it just like Viggo did. And that Viggo Mortensen we’re talking about here, was the only person Sean could come and talk to and they both behaved. But there was this Orlando who lusted after Viggo’s attention, the way like a growing boy wants his dad’s attention. So there wasn’t really much Viggo to share with others when Orlando took it all. Until it stopped, all of a sudden, Orlando just stopped circling Viggo and played with his own friends, Sean didn’t understand it.
It was a break between the takes and Sean was looking around for Viggo, it was a bit harder this way. Orlando was always cheering over something or jumping around Viggo, so they were easy to find, but now Orlando was making himself noticed elsewhere. It felt almost like Viggo hid every time he wasn’t needed at the set.
- Ah, there you are.
Viggo heard the glad voice of Sean coming behind him, he turned to see the tall Brit looking down at him.
Viggo sat on the grass looking into direction where you couldn’t see any sight of filming of an epic movie, just beautiful landscape of New Zealand.
- May I sit? Sean asked and Viggo gave him some kind of sign for agreement, something like a nod and a mumble.
For a moment they were quit.
- What happened to Orlando? He’s usually with you all the time.
Viggo didn’t answer first, but when he saw how innocently Sean looked at him, he finally spoke.
- We broke up.
Sean's head exploded for a moment. Broke up? They were together? Viggo is gay?
- Wha? Escaped from Sean’s lips.
- We broke up, Viggo replied.
- You were together?
It was Viggo’s turn to be surprised.
- You didn’t know?
- Erm... no.
- Oh... well we were.
- Sorry, I just didn’t know that you... or Orlando, well maybe Orlando was expected, but that you...
- Yer mumbling Sean, Viggo noted.
Sean shut up, but Viggo gestured him to end the sentence.
- That yer a faggot, Sean finally said, embarrassed that he did.
After that, Viggo didn’t say a thing for a while, just took a sip from his water bottle. Then it hit him, was that a problem?
- Does it uncomfort you? Viggo asked and the question was little something Sean didn’t really expect.
- Uncomfort me?
- Yeah, like does it make you feel... I dunno... bad around me?
Sean was stunned, bad around Viggo? Never!
- No, thas stuupid mate, Sean barked with a smile so that he wouldn’t be taken so dead seriously.
- Well, you’ve made your opinion about faggots very clear, Viggo said, little scared.
- Yeah.
Sean had had that conversation with Vig before, it finally hit Sean why it had quietened Viggo back then. He had said something that taking gays behind the barn and shoot them isn’t the right thing, but he’d rather have those gays behind the barn if he was in front of it.
- Yeah, Viggo said with a lame smile.
- But I like ya Vig, no mat’ what ya are, Sean said.
Viggo didn’t bother to say anything lame, so he just looked at Sean.
- I’ve always knew ya *could* go that way, I mean, ya let Orlando kiss ya as a reward after ya finally got yer fight scene at the Weathertop right.
- Well, that hadn’t actually any romantic meaning in it, we got together weeks after.
- Thas what I mean, yer comfortable with someone acting like that.
Viggo didn’t have the time to say anything when Sean already continued.
- I’m not.
- Wha? Viggo asked automatically.
- I’m not comfortable with behaviour like that.
- Orlando kissing me?
Sean just nodded before he understood he did so.
- No! I... I mean, with... with the whole kissing thing, fuck...
- Anyone kissing me?
- No Vig! Fuck ya know wha I mean! It’s ‘bout the mankiss thing... or kissing at all, fuck! The Yorshire accent came strong through when Sean rumbled with his words.
Viggo sat there quietly and looked at Sean, sun was shining behind him, so Viggo had to wrinkle his eyes and that made Viggo’s face unreadable for Sean.
- Bah, Sean said with blushing face and stood up.
For a moment he just inhaled peacefully and sucked the beauty of the landscape.
Viggo stood up too and faced Sean. Despite his own blushing and speeding heartbeat Sean could tell Viggo was nervous, what for? Sean wondered.
- You can if ya want to, Viggo said and blushed.
- Wha?
Viggo blushed more and turned his face away from Sean, but didn’t back out.
- You heard me, he said and forced himself to face Sean again.
- Yeah, but wadda ya mean? I can not like the behaviour or what?
Viggo stunned, Sean was so slow.
- Ya can kiss me if ya want to, you daft! Viggo repeated, but couldn’t blush any more.
Sean’s eyes grew awfully big and mouth dropped open, but he quickly normalised.
- Oh, Sean just said and looked pass Viggo.
Viggo saw Sean’s head making some weird repeating movement, lifting and withdrawing. Then Sean just looked at him and slightly kissed him, just barely, it was more like some mistake when you pass someone awfully close.
They were both quiet and looked to the ground. For a while.
- Ya ment like that? Sean finally asked and lifted his head, Viggo’s eyes soon looked right into his.
- No.
Sean sighted, it didn’t sound disappointment, more like a “it figures” -kind of a sight.
- But it’ll do, Viggo said and smiled.
Sean smiled too, for a relief.
- ‘till when? Sean asked when Viggo was about to leave.
- Dunno, Viggo simply said and continued after out hailing.
- I see it’s up to you.
Viggo was already trying to leave again, when Sean raised his voice again.
- I want to.
- What?
- Kiss ya again, Sean whispered.
Viggo gave him a tired smile.
- But not now.
- Everybody sees?
- Yeah.
- Ok, Viggo said, patted Sean’s back and smiled happily.
c'mon...
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Date: 2008-07-28 08:50 am (UTC)I'd consider ya as my saving angel! I haven't had a good push for writing 'cause I was afraid I could NEVER relese them! With this I just took a risk...
So I can see ya'll help me up, eh?